Whose Hearts are Mountains is a mess.
As well it should be. After all, it's a first draft. In the rush to get ideas on the page, things are going to be garbled. For example, I gave one object two different names, and two different characters shared the same name. There were a hundred subtle or less subtle things I corrected on the first pass.
And I'm not done yet. I now have to do a leisurely pass through for things like language (currently not the most poetic) and character (some of my secondary characters need development) and descriptions (too much telling, not enough showing) and that's going to take a while.
Luckily I'm taking a writing retreat over Thanksgiving...
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