I'm doing a major editorial change on Gaia's Hands again. This story is the bane of my existence and I should just burn it, but I'm compelled to make something of it.
The time table is too compressed, it seems. There's not enough time to develop Jeanne and Josh with the current setup, because it only runs from March to May 31.
Too little time, I think.
So I'm moving the start date back to October (which is important, because Josh needs to be riding his bike) and keeping the ending at Memorial Day (because there's a big planting of a food forest to be done, and a horticulturalist wouldn't plant much later than that.)
I will have to add in stuff.
I still wonder if I can make this story into something.
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