Friday, February 23, 2018

Flawed Characters

I'm thinking of the DC vs Marvel universe movie franchises, specifically two characters that are green: The Hulk (Marvel) vs. The Green Lantern (DC).

According to The Hulk's origin story, Bruce Banner is a mild-mannered physicist who gets clobbered by gamma rays, and turns into a huge, green creature of the ID when he gets angry. As such, he's a great superhero if one keeps him from smashing innocent bystanders and buildings. Bruce loathes his alter-ego, and this conflict adds depth and feelings of compassion toward his character.

The Green Lantern is a feckless dudebro who finds a lantern and a ring that link him to a network of intergalactic peacekeepers and superpowers. Readers are left wondering if a feckless dudebro should be allowed superpowers. Worse, though, is that we are left with the Hero's Journey of a privileged male getting more privilege.

One of these is the more interesting character, and it's not the dudebro.

We want our characters, especially our heroes, to have flaws that get in the way of their quest.

Dan Brown's books (Inferno, etc.) feature a protagonist named Robert Langdon, who seems at times childishly helpless in his books, which is an intriguing flaw. He comes off as almost on the autism spectrum -- focused on cryptology and solving puzzles, a bit clueless about people, led by the hand at times. However, Brown glosses over this with female characters who fall in love with him at the same time they want to mother him*, so there are no consequences of his flaw to him.  In addition, everyone thinks he's this cultured, articulate genius

Bella Swan in the Twilight series has an almost minuscule flaw -- she's clumsy. Unless she walks through mountains and upon tightropes without a net and almost falls while returning the Treasure of the Incas to the Incas, this flaw won't affect her meaningfully.  This is part of why Bella is discounted as being a Mary Sue, a perfect character designed as wish fulfillment for the author**.

Examples of good character flaws? In mystery, J.D. Robb created Eve Dallas, a horrifically abused child who grew up to be a good cop, but regularly struggles with nightmares about her past, difficulties in fathoming the rules of relationships, and being triggered by events from her professional life. Any character in Lord of the Rings (with the exception of Merry and Pippin) have baggage -- Boromir is so focused on saving his country he is blinded to evil; Aragorn really, really wants to be king; Galadriel is tempted by power, Frodo struggles mightily with the Ring; Eowyn has a painful crush on Aragorn, who marries Arwen in a pragmatic marriage.***

We love reading character flaws, because imperfect characters becoming heroes give us the reassurance that we too, with all of our character flaws, can become heroes.




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* I wish other people considered unrealistic, but there is this charge laid upon American women to "change" their husbands, who don't want to be changed. And who can blame either for this dynamic?

** The second reason is because female authors are routinely denigrated as writing Mary Sue characters, with the critics not noting that near-perfect characters like James T. Kirk (classic Star trek) and the aforementioned Robert Langdon are Marty Stus, the male equivalent of Mary Sue.

*** The movies portrayed Aragorn and Arwen as a love match. The book is much more pragmatic about that marriage. I wish the movie had followed the book in this case, because the triangle would have much more poignancy.

2 comments:

  1. Yes you are so right. Characters who are perfect have very little substance. They do not have depth and are rather boring. I tend to loose interest in the story if there are too many perfect characters. I want to be entertained and speculate what the character is going to do in a quandry.
    This is Lanetta

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    1. And "not perfect" doesn't mean a minor quirk, either. Clumsy? Minor imperfections in one's complexion? Being a dudebro like all the other dudebros? (Chris Pine in Star Trek, this one's for you!) Not enough. How about getting called on one's jealousy, or something? It's not a character arc if the character doesn't have to change...rant over.

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